(this is a link to YouTube, in case the video doesn't load)
In our pitch, which can be found by clicking the above link, Jack and I explain the various aspects we plan to incorporated into our opening sequence, such as the name and logo of our production company (Little Brother, with a silhouette image of a child holding his brother's hand filled with an image of a star system), the locations/settings of the scenes to be featured in the finished product (the bridge on Cromwell Road over the Hen Brook river, the reception of Longsands Academy), the characters (played by some fellow students), etc.
Improvements:
- Could have explain the whole film, which is about the choices a young teenager will have to take. Was he right to stay and look after his family by dropping out of school and taking up a life of crime,
- Address the audience a bit more in detailed,
- Changed the name of the film from "Really" to "Choices" as a way to connoted to the audience the tone of the film and it makes more sense in correlation to the story.
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